Tanya Ling final piece

So this is my final piece for the illustrator Tanya Ling. I have included the original Tanya Ling piece along with my own interpretation.
My illustration is the first post. I think it turned out reasonably well although there are some errors. The face shape is a bit off byt i think the colour of the background is good. The garment coloring had some issues but the general idea for watercolouring technique is shown well.